That’s what I like best about you, Erato sighed in bed, that’s why
you’ve become one of my favorites and why you will always be so.
I grazed her ear with my tongue, held the salty lobe between my lips.

I feel like singing when you do that, she said with more than a hint 
of music already in her voice. So sing, I said, and moved down
to the tenderness at the edge of her jaw. Hmmm, she said, that’s nice.

Is there anything you don’t like? I asked, genuinely meaning
to please. I don’t like poets in a hurry, she said, shifting
so my lips would achieve the more dangerous divot of her throat.

Ohhhh, she said, as I pressed a little harder there. She held my face
in both hands. And I hate when they get careless, especially
when employing second-person address. She sat up, and my mouth

fell to the tip of one breast. Yes, she said, you know how it can be—
they’re writing “you did this” and “you did that” and I always assume,
at first, that they mean me! She slid one finger into my mouth to tease

the nipple there. I mean it’s disappointing enough to observe
the lyric is addressed to someone else, and then, the poet spends
half the poem spouting information that the you—if she or he

were listening—would have known already, ostensibly as well as,
or better than, the speaker. I stopped to meet her eyes. I know just
what you mean, I said. She leaned down to take a turn, working my chest